As
I get my bearings I start to look around the fast moving van. I see long dark
hair in the driver’s seat. I see my mom fading farther away into the distance,
I have always thought of myself as unemotional but I start to cry at the
thought that I won’t see her again. I look at my arm and I see a huge piece of glass
sticking out and I’m still losing a lot of blood. I’m starting to not feel so
great. “You hold on back there!” is the last thing I hear before I shut my eyes.
“Wake
up Ava! Open your eyes!” I feel someone shaking me. I look and all I see is
long dark hair. I sit up and look around. I am in someone’s home. My arm is bandaged
up and this girl is just sitting here watching me. “Ava I need you to speak.”
She say as she flashes a little light into my eyes. “Who are you?” I push her
hand away. “Good you’re up. You need to eat, you have been out for two days.
You need to regain your strength if we are going to make it to your grandma’s
house.” In Timetopia we are taught to
never be violent or untrusting. If someone was these things they would be erased.
So most of us have little to no scars, but this dark haired lady who conveniently
didn’t answer my question, had lots of scars. “I’m sorry I must’ve missed the
part where you said who you are?” I
stand up to look her in the eyes. She leans past me and pulls a huge knife out
and puts it in her back pack. “I’m sorry
where are my manners? I’m Rev, nice to meet you.” She continues packing her
bag. “Hello Rev nice to meet you as
well.” I stop and it finally hits me she said we are going to my grandma’s
house. I wonder if she means the grandma that my parents swear I look like.
“Did you say my grandma’s house? Would this be my mother’s mom?” she turns and
smiles. In a way I have never seen anyone smile before in my life. That’s when I
notice her teeth are crooked, so I know that means something is wrong with her.
I step back away from her. “Your teeth!” I can’t help but shout. “Oh right I
forgot, you all get braces at 12. Freaks!” She is packing food and blankets now. “First,
what is a freak? And it is a law, everyone must get braces at age 12. We have
to do this, it’s not a choice. So why are your teeth crooked?” She sighs so loud and drops the back pack. “Do
you know why they make you get braces!? Why they make all of you get braces??
And why they make all of you stay within 20% body fat.” She says this like we weren’t all taught this
in school our whole life. “We are all made to look our best. So that there is
no jealousy or insecurity. So we can focus on the really important things. Like
the well being of the earth and each other.” Rev is shaking and I’m not sure
why. Something I’ve said is clearly upsetting her. “NOO, wrong! The Five just
want to be sure that you never do anything to stand out or be different. To
think for yourself or question anything they tell you.” She is shouting now.
I’m not sure why she is so angry. “The
Five stepped up after the war. They lost everything, the Five’s families were
murdered. So they built the time machine to save millions from the war but when
they changed one thing, their families were never born.” I sound like my
teacher in history. Rev is now pacing back and forth. “When was this war?” she
says as she rubs her hands on her face. “I’m not sure because it never
happened.” Rev laughs at me out loud. “The war is still 100 years from now. I’m
sure your history classes forgot to mention that. The Five went back 300
years.” Rev tilts her head at me like she just said something completely new to
me. “What does it matter when it is? The point is they fixed it.” I’m not sure
why I am standing up for the Five but it seems like I am. “Get rest. We are
going to have to go soon.” Rev hands me a blanket. I head over to the bed very
confused.
“Ava
get up we need to go. Do you hear that?” Rev say as she shoves everything into
the last bag. “Yeah it sounds like a motorbike in the distance.” Rev is running
back and forth to the van throwing the bags in. “Yeah, it’s the police and they
don’t sound too far away. We have to go now.” Rev keeps saying things I don’t
understand. “What are police? And they are probably wellness checkers. Why do
we have to run? They are just coming to ensure that I am okay. I did get hurt a
few days ago.” Rev is still running back and forth very quickly. “We are 300
miles from your home. There is no way they know you are hurt or that you are
here. If we don’t run they will erase your mom.” I’m not sure why but I trust
Rev. I get in the van and we drive away. I’m not sure what is happening or why
we are running but I know I don’t want anything to happen to my mom.
Well, the story keeps you wanting more, and guessing what will happen next. I like it!!
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